Awww, I was waiting for the real name... And I love-love-love how he looks up and sorta has this confused expression on his face when she demands it. Very beautiful. He tries to separate himself from it, so very hard, and she pulls it out of him... but then he pulls away. BWAAAAH!
This is an incredible story, my friend. Very well written, very powerful, my emotions are jerked, I adore both characters... You've done amazingly well. *High five*